Is This Real?

Posted in Break Up on February 12th, 2009

You lift me slowly off my feet,
you whisper in my ear and say you love me
My heart stops in shock,
with surprise I look at you
My tears began to call you,
as I began to cry on your shoulder
You hold me within your arms,
tightly as i slip away
You look at me and assemble your smile,
a twist in time with my soul
It tells me if I should stay,
or should I leave with nothing
but a broken heart without a key
With no one to unlock it
Either I leave with the past,
or see what’s in my future.

This poem was written/submitted by Jayy.


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  1. 1. sonya rector Said：
    March 25th, 2009 at 2:32 pm

    this is a really pretty poem it made think about a break up

  2. 2. Kiki Said：
    May 13th, 2009 at 5:00 pm

    GREAT JOB!!!!!! I just got out of a relationship and i was so heart broken I LOVE your poem

  3. 3. Sabrina Said：
    May 21st, 2009 at 10:59 pm

    this poem made me think of mine … Beautiful

    You told me i was beautiful
    it meant so much to me
    but when i look in the mirror
    no beauti
    no Beauti i could see
    i asked you why you said that
    i asked you why you lied
    you told me..
    the beauti lay inside

  4. 4. bianca Said：
    November 5th, 2009 at 5:08 am

    pretty poem i like it i write poetry myself i got two notebooks of poems that i wrote keep up the good work remember keep god first

  5. 5. martin .m. Said：
    April 1st, 2010 at 10:17 pm

    this iz a purday dope a*s poem …..my gurl luvz it

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